12 Hours Plan Feedback.

Bellow is our rough media opening, its basically a plan for the camera shots and rehearsal for our actors it should also be good for feedback on dialogue, costumes and sounds
After showing the rough opening to an audience which was basically our target audience for the film we received a lot of constructive criticism. The chosen sound track (which hasn't be edited on yet) had good response as did costumes and the actors however we have now debated added a sequence of the antagonist in the morning due to feedback stating that the opening lacked tension and was boring at points. The night scene went down well with our audience and therefor we've decided to keep that basically the same.
we will re-film all the shots in half term and edit quickly as to reach the deadline.

Film Opening Update-

The filming for our rough edit has now been finished however we are yet to edit it which is a worry. Once the rough editing is completed we've decided to re film the entire footage because although it will work for a rough edit as it outlines the basic plot of the opening, yet setting up the rest of the plot throughout the entire film, but we would ideally like a better quality final piece with a more in depth introduction to the protagonist and a larger variation of more advance camera shots and angle.
The fact that we will re film all the footage is also helpful because our peers will be able to give us feedback on our rough edit allowing us to fine tune sound, dialogue, locations, mise-en-scene and camera shots. Hopefully this in turn will give us a better final piece that is more in keeping and representative of our skills and aspirations as a group.